“You’re Brave for Renting This House”
Three weeks earlier, my husband, Matt, and I had thought we’d gotten ridiculously lucky.
We had spent almost two months looking for a rental in Cedar Glen, a quiet suburb with tree-lined streets, sidewalks wide enough for strollers, and houses built close enough together that neighbors could borrow sugar without getting into their cars.
The house on Hawthorne Lane had three bedrooms, a small screened porch, an attached garage, and a backyard with an old maple tree that shaded almost half the lawn.
The rent was $340 less per month than the other houses we’d toured.
That should have made me suspicious.
Instead, I told Matt, “Don’t ask questions. Sign before somebody changes their mind.”
He laughed.
We signed.
On moving day, we found out what apparently came with the discount.
We had been there less than forty minutes when a woman from across the street walked over carrying two lemonades.
She introduced herself as Donna Patterson.
Donna was probably in her late fifties, with silver-blond hair and the kind of friendly face that made you feel as if she already knew your birthday, your dog’s name, and what time you usually went to bed.
She handed me a cup, then glanced toward our left-side fence.
“Well,” she said slowly, “you’re brave.”
I thought she meant because Matt and I were moving furniture ourselves.
“Not really,” I laughed. “We rented a dolly.”
She didn’t laugh.
Her eyes stayed on the fence.
“I mean renting this house.”
I followed her gaze.
“Why?”
Donna lowered her voice.
“You haven’t met Grant yet?”
“No.”
She gave me a look I couldn’t quite read.
“He’s raising seven children over there.”
I smiled, waiting for the rest.
It didn’t come.
“Okay,” I said.
“Alone.”
I shrugged. “That sounds exhausting.”
“You’ll see.”
That was all she said.
But the way she said it made those two words feel much heavier than they should have.
Two hours later, another neighbor arrived.
This time it was a man named Phil who lived three houses down. He brought us a plate of chocolate-chip cookies and apparently considered subtlety a waste of time.
“Nobody warned you about the Mercers?”
“Donna mentioned them.”
Phil raised his eyebrows.
“Seven kids.”
“So I heard.”
“And Grant runs that place like a boot camp.”
Matt, carrying a lamp through the doorway behind us, stopped.
“A boot camp?”
Phil leaned closer.
“You’ll hear the whistle.”
That sentence stayed with me.
Especially because Phil was right.
